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So fnally i have reached my las journal though it feels good to have reached iot i am very tired my eyelids start to feel heavy and i dont know if i am more tired than happy though i feel that this will not be the last tim i blog because i is actaully soemthign evry fun you get to vent and express yourself without anyporblem and a lot more easier than writing because i perosnally have the worst writing in the worls so this helps me make readlable journals though my grammar is horendous and lets not start with spelling but i get the drift of what i was trying to say. Thsi last couple of months though rough on me were a good couplle of mohths and i am happy to be currently done with the semester for now singing off :D

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This blog is past over due its one that i wanted to write last ummer but i diditn blog so i wasnt able to it was about a time thta i ent to a local partie and lost my phone , so i went to one of my friedds birthday party and this party ends yup geting pretty full people we kne people we dont know and so me being stupid i end up getting pretty drunk and once i have bcome drunk i start doing the irishndance in the middle of the dance floor as u can imagene pretty stupid right after i was done dancing i went to tlak to my friends and i went to check my phone and after i couldnt fin it i diditn knwo what to do so i started askign around and this guy told me he found it and gave it to some guy thta said t was his and when i went to task him the guy said he didint do it a big fight was gonna break out but i just avoided it because it was my friends house an di diidnt realy want to start a big fight

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I ahve relaized that evretime i start blogging i start with a intention of what i am goin to write about but as i am halfway through what i am writing i end up going off in a random rant which i eblibe is actually really funny,dont be surprised if i actually end up doign it here because as soon as a new though comes into my mind i just buid on that , idk if tht is good or bad well i think its actually good because my mind is always very active and always has different thoughts coming into its head that why i think i moght be apretty social person i dont have talkking skills, but i eblive i picked up my talking skills because whne i was younger i was really into this girl and i was too scared to talk to her in person so i would aim her and it helped me build my talking skills dramatically and now i cant stop talking ahah :D

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So the night is upon me and i am starting to feel just a tad bit tired wellreally tired i am someone that falls aslep early all the time even though to soem this wouldnt bee considered early as they fall asleep much earlier but to most of ym friend this is early, but i personally liek to sleep early because then i also get to wake up eary and that something i personally liek to do because i get to enjoy the day because if i were to wake up at around eleven in the morni i feel like i have already missed most of my dad and i wont be able to enjoy my day as much as i would have , so i think that is a wierd fact about me sleep is not much of an option when the sun is out and sometimes even when it is night.

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So i have requested the day of from work on saturday because i am going to be watching a soccer game its going to be the champions fianl its going to be manchester united against Fc. Barcelona im very excited i wish it was saturday alreayd so i would be abe to watch the game, this final happend about to years ago and barcelona beat man u . its not always the same teams because many of europes elite clubs compete but thsi just goes to show the potency of these two teams. I have a very big passion for soccer when i was small i used to watch it a lot i grew up watching soccer which help me grow a love for soccer now. ITs also very speical becausei can always watch it with my dad and we get to spend time together , and not just my dad but wth family now days its a lot more harder to get toegther and actually sit down and do soething and siccer brings us togather in that aspect.

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Today i woke up and did and went and did my morning jog once i got back i started doing weights and this though came into my head that i should get a twitterme personally i have always made fun of the people that ahve a twitters beause i think its stupid but in realityi have not wqnted to get a twitter because i think it would be complicated to use i had the same problem with getting a face book at first ahha, but i ended up coming to the conclusion that was going to get one and i did the funny part is that it was just as confusing as it thought maybee even worse i somewhat even regreat getting one #FAIL of the Day

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the other day i went to go watch a coupe o bands at my friends house because he was hosting a show, and he had not hosted a show ina very long time so i was excited to go , and then when i got there i saw a friens that i had not seen ina while and so we decided to go buy some beer to celbrate the occasion kinda dumb how we find any reason to start drinking , but we began too drink and the bands played and then one of my friends band started playing and at these local shows there are people that go into these mosh pits and hit people and since i was kinda druk i decided to do that and i ended up hurting my hand one thing i have to say is i have failes haha :D

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so the week is midway and for some reason i feel better than i have felt in a hwile could it be because school is done but i feel this joy that i have not felt in a while , so i am thinking it had to do with school because when i am n school, i have mass amounts of pressure because work and school is something that becomes difficult to balance, but life should be pretty simple for the next couple of months all i will be doing is just workign and workign is somethi that is simple so i have no problem with that, and my job is not that difficul i work at a bank so i cant complain not a job that is too demanding so for the first time in a couple of i feel happy for no reason. Happy on a wednesday who would ahve thought

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For part of the morning I have been looking for a small notebook because today when I tried to go to the school and sell one of my books they told.me that if I was gonna sell one of my books that I would get 20 more dollars if I were to bring the notebook which really upset me because the.notebook is nothing much but line paper and they will pay me 20 dollars less to ne because of that and I have looked for it everywhere and I cannot seem to find it whic is really irritating me.whoevr thought such a small book would become a large problem for.me ani hve.until 6 to find the book because that os when they will top buying te book I think I will only look for tit for a small amount of time and if I am.not able to fin it I will just give up and be robbed off 20 dollars sometimes.I think that this system is just a tad bit unfair but who am.I.to say anything About it right

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Saying one more time before we go until the sunshine, Say good bye to the long hours, so good bye to the tedios homework that took a long time to do. Say good bye to the alarm going off. ANNOYING!! Say good bye to the centers in which I was there for hours trying to find the missing piece and to the one that took the time to teach me the right way to find that peice. Say good bye to that loud kid that talks about so much about weed that he makes think your high. Say good bye sleeplees nights over the week day to prepare for the test. Good bye good bye ill see next semester and no im talking about summer im talk after summer. After i partied my pants off and relax my brain a bit and have a nice cold beer. Well deserved to myself :D!!!! Horraayy!!!

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I have been studying for my history mid term which has not been fun at all if there is one thing i hate more than anyhing else is finals week. If there would be one phrase that could express how i feel right now, and pardon my french is Fuck You Finals Week , and i meen nothing bad intended to my proffesors haha its just that the pressure begins to set into me so i begin just to feel the presue from work school and i fee that it catches up to me but i elive that after this wee i will be back to nomal and i will not have nothing to worr about and i an just work the summer and start it all over again next semester.

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So Today i had to take my dog to get his nails cut which was very intresting because he dosent really liek to be around peole so it is always very funny to watch ho he reacts when we walked into the pet shop he was not in the best mood so we went in and then i gave him tot he lady and he started growling at her but with time he ended p calming down which was good because the lady could finnaly help us she ended up cutting his nails and it worked out , the funny part is that , i am scared to cut his nails because theire is a prcise place where thye need t be cut and i am not good at that

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So my day seems to be improving I feel alot more happy than I did ar th beggining of y day. Now I am at my house pkayin cards with my family. Doing the final revisions on m essay that I hav to turn in tommorow I am excited that the week is alsmost done now I just. Hve to figure out what time my final is going to e because I do. Want to be late I hve to. Finals tommorow so that means I have to wake.up really early to study for ny hisory fi al which I hope that I do good for. I have performed well when I have taken a final. I hope that tommorw isint any different. . The only thing that id bothering m is that nybhand is hurting I hurt.it yesterday bu with time.it.willl get better

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So I feel real tired happy that the week is coming to th end hopefully the week that isncomig up goes really fast. I want to be done with school I am starting to feel thebpressure of school along with work the pressure nownisbstatting to set in but I feel once I get through this week I should be fine. Other than that I had a really good weekend hung out with ny friends which is always a pleasure. Yesterday I didn't ft home till about 5 in the morning so I am really tired. And I didn't et so much sleep because I woke up at 8 so running on three hours of sleep I now have to finish my essay and study for ny history final wish me luck

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so yesterday i recieved a phone cal from my cuzins wife and she had asked me if i wold be able tot ake care of her son and since i had no school today i told her that i would gladly take careof her kid, but when i take careof him i also realize ho hard it is to care for a kid and how much attention that a child needs , if they are to be left alone for one second anythign can happen i them makes me realize that at th moment i am not ready to be able to take care of a kid and that i still need many more years of experience in the world until i am able to begin taking responsibility of another life. Though a child brings many joys into many people lifes with that happiness that it brings comes great responsibility that many may not be resy to hndle , and at this moment as i see my self i think that if i were to have a child i would not be ready.

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today has been a real busy day i had to be running all over the city because i found out the one of my czins wasa rrested so we have been running all over trying to seee what we are able to do for him , hopefully we are able to figure something out because since he is also an immigrant he runs the risk of being deported back to his hom counry which would not benefit him at all especially now that t is next to impposibe to make i back to the united staes due to the fact of all of the drug lords in mexico trying to cotrol that area, we have been calling many jails trying to figure out where he is but they do not give us too much information hopefully by the end of today we end up getting some good news because the last couple of days have resulted in nothing

Free Write

There have been a couple of revisions thta i have made revisions but the miost important onees that i made were the thesis because i feel that my thesis as lacking very much but now i feel that i dont have a strong thesis my essay will not be able to stand on its own, but now that it has the strong thesis its a much better essay

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past couple of days have been pretty harsh on me and my family many things can happen in so little time. Of friday my uncle got a phone call with bad news that oine of my cuzins was in a jail and that he was going to be deprted which was very shockign news , he is not a us citizen which makes him very vulnerable to being deported, so he ended up being pulled over and since he did not have a liscence the cops arrested him, then he went to jail and know he is in the proccess of being deprted has made our lifes that much more complicated.

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my thesis so far is not a good thesis i feel that it needs radical change because it is very week i plan to work on it over the weeknd so that i am able to start building on my essay because me personally i am not able to write an essay or even have ideas. with a weak thesis its liek having a perosn with out fete they are not able to functin as well as thye should and my thesis at the moment is handicapp but it should be a good thesis in a couple of days

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Ezperansa is the represenatative of all the women on mango street she is the one who says what they want to since the woman cannot say i themselves. Throughout the book we get many stories of women that took part in ezperansas life. i feelt that she does not have much of a different out look on the other characters

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The time to begin writing an article is when you have finished it to your satisfaction. By that time you begin to clearly and logically perceive what it is that you really want to say.


to say the truth i dont knw what the qoute is trying to tell me maybee it is because i am a little dumn ahha well i am not dumb the sleep that i have been spreivd ould also be affecting my inteltectual skills at the moment so i am not able to write much on this particular qoute but what i belive it says is that you have to start ur article whne u have a full idea in your head u can not start it with half of an idea because it will be incomplete a article that is incomlte will not be good because it is missing a piece of the puzzle

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We came to this world thinking that everything would fall into to our laps. Our hopes and dreams been distorted by dreams that consume us every night we go to sleep. As a young kids we thought once we got to that golden age we thought we would have everything but once we got to that golden age we find out that everything we fought isn’t here. Once we got the real dose of reality we lose hope and end up bitter. But when we were young we didn’t care we fought until we got that result. Now we don’t even try striving to succeed we cage our minds thinking things will end same way. Let’s encourage our self’s to break out of this slum and stop thinking a like bum and go fight this world until we die. Now that’s how we should live our lives as kids that willing to do anything to fight for our dreams.

House on mango street review

1.)The book is writen to the average readder though the book is written about a womans life she has made the book so it is also appealing to the a male audience.
2.)The narrator of the book is esperansa throughout the book the story is told through her.
3.)The book is broken up in short story experiences
4.)The book is about the life experiences that esperansa has while living in mango street.
5.)I would say that the book is more of a straight foward book , the provide us with the stories i feel that they dont want us to really feel emotional for her.

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Hosue on mango street has been a very intresting read. In high school i was ssinged the book but since i was a lazy student i did not read the book. We are provided with many stories of esperanza and her experiences which help people maybee even relate to her stories. They talk about the struggles that one goes through as a child and as esperanza grows up. Also the ending there was the last sentence where i felt that it didint make sense.Does she want the people to get out , or will thye get out?

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Red clowns is a very powerful story we see where esperanza gets raped and it si the climax of the stry and its intresting how esperaza starts talkign about how it was soppoused to be her first sexual encounter and we seet hat sh ewas expecting somethign much more different , the rape is somethign evry powerful and we can see that there is a big slpit from esperanzanad men in general in this situation , she always expected her first sexual encounter to be liek the movies and the books but it was nothing like that

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Today i went to go and buy a computer the computer that i had before was not working correctly any more i t was running at a ver slow rate which was making me fall behind in my homework . because evreytime i ould go on the computer to do some hw it would take me 1 hour or more to do soemthing that shold only take me 15 minutes which is a lot more longer and i did not like that so i decded to go ad buy the computer it ended up costing me very much money but i feel it was a good invesment.

Notes

Essay 3
Argumentative Thesis
Arrngement
Mla Citation- works cited
Bring topic on monday


Fast Food places use toys, games, and

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My Perfect home is somewhere I can have fun, and I have no stress. I am someone who likes to have fun. In many situations when I go out with my friends I am known as the life of the party. I try to make sure that every time i go somewhere I make it a fun time because I do not want to have a bad time. I want people to feel that they have fun when they come to my home. I try to live a life that does not have much stress. In most situations I try and avoid anything that is going to cause conflict in my life. If it is going to become a problem I rather not get involved because it will big problems into my life. When people come into my home they should feel that my home is somewhere that they can come, and they can forget about their current problems that they are having. If my perfect home is able to provide me and the people around me with fun and not stress I feel that it can make it so I am that much closer to reaching my perfect home.

Free write No speak english

IT is similar because someone is able to do it , but someone might choose not to do it. Like in the book they wamt her to english but she does not want to learn becuase she does not want to become distant from her home roots and by learning english and speaking it she becomes more distant. I belive its more about her beign more afraid of english because it will overcome her and like i had said llose her roots.

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Yesterday was a very intresting day for me , i woke up and was running on no sleep because the prevoius night i had got home super late ; so when i woke up i decided to go to watch a soccer game like i usually do. After i got to the soccer game a couple of my fiends wanted to go to the casino where i had never been so i decided to go on my way over there i stopped by the bank and withdrew money in the hopes that i would win some money; when i got to the casino i played the slot mach9nes for a mall amount of time and lost a little bit of money after i did not win i went to play poker after almost loosing all of my money i began to win and got to a petty nice stack of chips but since i wanted to win more i kept playng which led to my downfall and i lost all of my money :/

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Esperanza is also trying to have a perfect home. ” Only a house quiet as snow, a space for myself to go, clean as paper before the poem” , we get the understanding that she is trying to reach her definition of happiness. She lets us know that she wants to go to a place that is very quiet. By telling this she helps with understanding that maybe her past might have not been as quiet, and maybe a place where many things happened all the time. She wants a place where she can only go where she does not have to deal with people. By secluding herself she is helping herself be happy. She also wants her home to be as clean as paper before the poem she wants to go to a place where everything is pure; a paper before the poem is a paper that has no story. Esperanza wants to be at a home where her story that she had in her past does not exist. Esperanza may have a different definition of what she believes happiness maybe from to her, but that’s what she is looking for.

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esperanza is a very intrestin perosn i feel she is a ery powerful woman and we get that when we read the book because in many aspects she is the voice for all of the people of the book and for her to be speaking on behalf of all of these popel the sense is giving us that she is the almighty powerful though the term is loosly used because not all mighty powerful but she is the one that is used to tell the stories to the reader because maybee the pople in the book are too scared to speka on theor own behalfs.

Free write (litle feet)

esperanza is focusing on the fact that the sky never runs out that she feels safe, because the city that she is growing up in is not very safe and she explains thais by the beauty of the flowers that run out ; this would show the example of her city and how it might have spurts of beaty it runs out.. also when they talk about darius chasing the girls around showing that there might be hope because though darius shows that there is more beauty in the world that there are somethinngs that  will bring beauty to the world and though it may be at a distance and esperanza might not see it is there

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yesterday was very fun day though i do not remember muchi remember the first part of the night . i forgot what happend because i neded up getting super drunk so me being under the influence helped me forget much of my night but , it was a very fun night i met new people and had fun with old friends we started the night by going to buy the beer which withing its self was an adventure because we ended up getting lit up by a helicopter because my friend was going 100 mph on the street thankfully nothing happend. after we ended up playing many games of beer pong. I met this girl that was super cool and after i was to drunk to remember what happend

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So today i had taken a test for my math class and it was on my mind the whole day because i belive that i had missed the easiest question on the test . this question i should not have missed i had gotten the most complicated ones on the test right but not the easiest one.this problem played in my head the whole day , and i repeat what should have happend opposed to what happend.

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So I went to do my taxes today not the dumbest experience beause I had t wait a very longntime because where I go there are many people that go and do thee taxes there i arrived at about.3 andended up leaving.at 6 the worst part was that it was on my day off from work andi only get one work off from work so to spend my day at the tax office was not very fun but the good thing was that I was able to get them.done and don't have to deal with them again whih makes me very happy. So ny day was use towards something good and now the days that I will have off I can have to my self

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The changes that I have decided to make on my essay were to better my essay. I had made some changes in sentence structure so that it would make it easier for the reader to read my paper. If it is not easy to read my paper the reader might get confused on the point that I am trying to show them. I also added quotes from scholarly journals s that it would be able to support my argument. By doing this I am able to provide my reader with some facts so that it makes my essay that much more believable and a lot stronger. I also made many spelling correction and also made many grammar changes, so that my essay is grammatically correct, and also does not confuse the reader.

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Today i woke up and remebered that i had to turn in my essay which caught me off gaurd because i was not prepared to turn it in. So since i did not have much time  i had to put one together as fast as i possibly could. Would i have the sufficient time to put the essay together i did not know but i did not have time to think about it i had to begin to write my esay. I  only has 45 minutes to put it together so i got trough my first 2 paragraphs with no problem with even time to spare, but then i got writers block i did not know what to write about. So i took a 5 minute break and begin to think of ideas. This ended up helping me because i got the perfect ideas and finished my essay with 5 minutes to spare. :)

Free write (his other cousin)

It was very intresting how louies cousing had stolen a car to go show it off in the neighborhood , he gave the kids in the neighborhood rides which was very important because it helps sets the mood for what happens afterwards when he ends up taking off because he is feeling the cops. thoguh he had stolen the car he still wants to please the kids by giving them rides showing that though he did something bad he is still doing something good.

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When i was a child  i really wanted to buy a water gun during the summer because it was really hot and i would be able to have fun and at the same time cool down. I ended up asking my parents if they would be able to buy me the water gun; my dad let me know that he would tell me later on during the day. When it came time to let me know if he was going to be able to purchase the water gun he told me that he was not going to be able to buy it for me because of my behavior lately and so i began to throw a temper tantrum , which ended up making it worse because i got yelled at and ended up getting grounded , so i learned when my parents tell me that they are not going to buy me something don't get mad.

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Today i woke up really early which o do not like doing because i love to get as much sleep as i possibly can , but i had to come to school so there was no other option but to wake up. Once i had gotten up i went ad turned my tv on and realized that i was running late what a disater, i was not sure if  i was going to be late for class so i rushed and showered had a bowl of cereal and was iut the door; seemed like time was against me , but i was going to beat it i just had about 15 minutes to reach school and i did.

journal 2

today was a very interesting sunday not to not too much but it was a great sunday. I watched the football games for part of my days which were very interesting football game because they have nothing to lose today were what they call the proble sos very interesting to watch the best players in the football leagues to format a very fun level which you rarely see in the league any more because ser. Team wants to win but not today because the teams just wanted ed tobhae fun because the season was over so there was no reason why theybshoyldnt have fun

Free write (My name )

My name does not have much history my father and my mother just decided to give me that name because they liked it and it is soemone common to see man salvadorean families name their kids nelson. Growing up i was very proud to wear the name nelson ; nelson is not a name commonly seen when i was in high school at my school i was the only nelson out of large amoutn of people, and i have ran into many people in my life and only one time i ahve ran into another nelson and it was at chaffey college and he was a salvadorean to. So i am very happy with my name because people never get mistaken when they are taking about me if they are tlakign about nelson they  are talking about no one else but me they dont have to add an extra name to my name like tall nelson, short nelson, bald nelson and so on. Which makes me very happy because withing my friends there are many repeat names and we have to give them a particular name so that we are able to distiguish between them. Many people would hope to have a name that is not used very much by people and i am glad that i am on of them.

Main Point: Havign a name that is not commonly used is a great thing to have.

Free write 4

Siblings are very important people in someones life especially when this person has an older brother because they can help guide they way as their smaller brother grows up. In my case this was a very different situation because my brother did not help guide me ; i have acted as if i were the older brother in our family because i take much more responsibility than he does i have a job and provide him with what he needs such as a cell phone money for food ; that is not the only thing that i provide him with i also give him guidance on how to preform well in school, and when he has a job interview i also prepare him so that he is able to get the job and start making improvements in his life. In a regular ;life most older brothers are supposed to lead they way for a smaller brother an be the example in this case i am the example!

The main point: Someone growing up and acting as if they were the older brother instead of his brother acting like if he was the older one.

journal 1

Today was a good day because I wad able to leave work early which I never get to do so I was able to have more time to do homework anactually do this blog. I evvn had time to make my self somethig good. To eat and I rarely have. Tine to do that now I just eat penut butter and jell sanwhoches so this is going to be good for a change. The best part of today was that we were not busy so we did not have to work to hard :)

Free write 2

Attending my first professional soccer game would be a unforgettable experience.I was 6 yrs. old when this would happen and i had not attended a professional soccer game before this so i would be very excited. My father would let me know that the tickets he had bought were for his national team which is El Salvador.The game was  on a Saturday , so that Saturday afternoon we would go to the stadium to watch the game . When we got to the game the atmosphere was very fun people were very prideful of the team that they were supporting having their national flags painted on their face.

Action: I was going to go to a soccer game to see my fathers national team play
Actors: Me (nelson) ,Father, brother,uncle, cousin , all of the people that were present at the game
Setting: The rose bowl
Motive: To experience a live professional soccer game
Method: my father obtaining the tickets/by sitting in the stadium and watching the game

Free write 1

One o0f the child hood emmories that i would never forget would be the time that i went to go see my first socccer game. It was very memorable because i had so much fun and i never thought that i would be able to experience so much fun by going to the game. I always thought that watching a game on tv would be the same as watching it at a stadium , but i would be mistaken. I was about 6 years old when this appen my father had gotten tickets for a national soccer game it was going to be el salvador vs. costa rica a very good soccer game just by the names maentioned. The game would be on a saturday and that whole week i could not wait until i would go. Finally, the day that i would go to the soccer game would come and we were on our way tow atch the game.

First day of english 450

Hello My name is nelson