free write

The changes that I have decided to make on my essay were to better my essay. I had made some changes in sentence structure so that it would make it easier for the reader to read my paper. If it is not easy to read my paper the reader might get confused on the point that I am trying to show them. I also added quotes from scholarly journals s that it would be able to support my argument. By doing this I am able to provide my reader with some facts so that it makes my essay that much more believable and a lot stronger. I also made many spelling correction and also made many grammar changes, so that my essay is grammatically correct, and also does not confuse the reader.