Wednesday, April 27, 2011

Free write

The time to begin writing an article is when you have finished it to your satisfaction. By that time you begin to clearly and logically perceive what it is that you really want to say.


to say the truth i dont knw what the qoute is trying to tell me maybee it is because i am a little dumn ahha well i am not dumb the sleep that i have been spreivd ould also be affecting my inteltectual skills at the moment so i am not able to write much on this particular qoute but what i belive it says is that you have to start ur article whne u have a full idea in your head u can not start it with half of an idea because it will be incomplete a article that is incomlte will not be good because it is missing a piece of the puzzle

Monday, April 11, 2011

Free write

We came to this world thinking that everything would fall into to our laps. Our hopes and dreams been distorted by dreams that consume us every night we go to sleep. As a young kids we thought once we got to that golden age we thought we would have everything but once we got to that golden age we find out that everything we fought isn’t here. Once we got the real dose of reality we lose hope and end up bitter. But when we were young we didn’t care we fought until we got that result. Now we don’t even try striving to succeed we cage our minds thinking things will end same way. Let’s encourage our self’s to break out of this slum and stop thinking a like bum and go fight this world until we die. Now that’s how we should live our lives as kids that willing to do anything to fight for our dreams.

Monday, April 4, 2011

House on mango street review

1.)The book is writen to the average readder though the book is written about a womans life she has made the book so it is also appealing to the a male audience.
2.)The narrator of the book is esperansa throughout the book the story is told through her.
3.)The book is broken up in short story experiences
4.)The book is about the life experiences that esperansa has while living in mango street.
5.)I would say that the book is more of a straight foward book , the provide us with the stories i feel that they dont want us to really feel emotional for her.

Free write

Hosue on mango street has been a very intresting read. In high school i was ssinged the book but since i was a lazy student i did not read the book. We are provided with many stories of esperanza and her experiences which help people maybee even relate to her stories. They talk about the struggles that one goes through as a child and as esperanza grows up. Also the ending there was the last sentence where i felt that it didint make sense.Does she want the people to get out , or will thye get out?